Treasure Island

DICKSON MSETI

(08/11/1984 / DAR ES SALAAM)

I HATE YOU 'hate'


my tears are flowing like a rain,
when am trying to catch that love train,
my feet fails to move as they feel pain,
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  • Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner (4/22/2010 6:35:00 AM)

    This is really a very nice poem..i must say that not all depends on writing skill, 'coz what made me love this poem is your heart and the emotion that it carried along. Keep writing.. Best wishes to ya :) (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (4/22/2010 6:13:00 AM)

    Testing his knife on my body! it happened,
    even the donkey felt sorry for me, my cat cried,
    my voice of pain was like a guitar tuned

    Rarest experiences of life have treasured you. So cultivate a bit more humanity rather than hating every noise. Love sometimes co-operate us to know what is death. Perhaps you have got such valuable feelings though out your life as reflected in your writing. Compassion is another dimension of love. So you just move like a human.

    Write more poet, fight more and live long.......

    pranab (Report) Reply

  • Lady Simple (4/16/2010 5:40:00 AM)

    hate is a strong word but i understand why you used them word I HATE YOU, you are never alone in this world (Report) Reply

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